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A New Beginning

About a sudden change which might come to our lives. The problems we faced, people we met. Soon enough there's always a new beginning for us.

Life has twisted
To a whole new level.
From different countries, towns and cities
To a new world.
Situations I faced, which crumbled me to pieces.
Loved ones I knew, who disappeared under the grounds like rotten bodies and flesh.
School was jail for students.
Locked inside a room, doing paper work.
College enters my life
A sign of a new beginning.
I inhaled freedom,
like as if I had been released from prison.
People I hated! Because of being a show off!
And now, there's people I love! Because they're caring as the others who were not!
This is a change for me!
A new beginning that I may refresh myself and my life again. I call this a great new start!

Here are more of my poems you may enjoy:

Sunset

I No Longer Love You

Global Warming

Love Will Find a Way

Lost in a Different World

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Comments (8)
#1 by Eric Mendoza, Oct 22, 2008
Indeed, even though the story goes on, it has many new beginnings.
#2 by  Kimberly Lee, Nov 11, 2008
Powerful images of things I would want to leave behind to start new again. Good job.
#3 by  Melody Arcamo Lagrimas, Nov 11, 2008
Excellent imagery and nice choice of words.
#4 by Rana Sinha, Nov 12, 2008
Good portrayal. Had a good laugh with "School was jail for students". All the best to a new start.
#5 by  MMV Abad, Nov 12, 2008
nicely written. thanks for sharing.
#6 by truth2bknown, Dec 4, 2008
very nice work , you should be getting plenty of pageviews for your articles.
#7 by  Tennessee Thompson, Jan 8, 2009
Very nicely done.
#8 by  Riley Themend, Jan 29, 2009
I can really relate to this poem, because I am approoching that point in my life.
School being a jail is a very nice metaphor as well as the image of beign crumbled to pieces
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