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Cycle of Love

by nobert soloria bermosa, Aug 28, 2008

Love, now I see you, now I don't.

Up there from nowhere
Like a shooting star
Heaven has sent you to me
Just like the others

Keeping you, treasuring you
Cherishing you, loving you
Just like the others

Holding on so tight
Praying Intently
We'll stay together
And hoping fervently
You'll stay forever

Up, up from here
Like a shooting star
You're no longer in my hand
Just like the others

Up, up there in heaven
Like a shooting star
You're no longer in sight
Like all the others

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#1 by mae, Aug 28, 2008

So beautifully written.

#2 by Unofre Pili, Aug 28, 2008

sentimental and perfect imagery.

#3 by claris, Aug 28, 2008

nicely done poem, romantic one.

#4 by Alexa Gates, Aug 28, 2008

very beautiful!

#5 by The Quail, Aug 28, 2008

Awesome poem well done.

#6 by Lauren, Aug 28, 2008

Another romantic one Norbert. It's truly lovely

#7 by Loreta Dorington, Aug 28, 2008

Yes, lovely poem but very sad, too, if I may say.

#8 by tonisan60, Aug 28, 2008

very romantic and beautiful, my applauses

#9 by Juancav, Aug 28, 2008

Nostalgic and beautiful poem.

#10 by PR Mace, Aug 28, 2008

Romantic and very touching. Good job. Nice to see another side of you.

#11 by valli, Aug 28, 2008

Beautiful poem.

#12 by william rodriguez II, Aug 29, 2008

Bravo!

#13 by Cynthia, Aug 29, 2008

Nobert, this is such a beautifully penned piece of poetry. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. *S* Cynthia

#14 by desmonrock21, Aug 29, 2008

double thumbs up! very lovely poem sir..

#15 by Eden Emersen, Aug 29, 2008

They must be beautiful souls for God to want them so. I like the vulnerability in the poem.

#16 by acecampillo, Aug 29, 2008

I like the way this poem is written.
There is so much passion in it. Keep up the good work.
God Bless!

#17 by tracy sardelli, Aug 30, 2008

Lovely poem, thank you.

#18 by Glynis Smy, Aug 31, 2008

Simple, elegant and beautiful work

#19 by R.B. Parsley, Aug 31, 2008

Nobert,
What a surprise!So well written buddy. The emotion comes through quite clearly!!! Write some more of these buddy. You are quite a poet!!!! Excellent job. Keep up the good work!!!

Randy

#20 by Judy Sheldon, Sep 1, 2008

Beautiful and exquisitely sad.