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From Both Ends to Both Extremes

Hello, goodbye.

From the east
And from the west
Met at the middle
And get along well

Gently, lovingly, joyously
Seem to flow endlessly
Cascading beautifully
Traversing, enjoying
Breathtaking scenery

Enduring the sun
The harsh, vast arid land
Standing strong together
Holding each other's arm

Painstakingly resisting
All storm & bad weather
Fighting the biting cold
Giving, sharing warmth
But somehow, somewhere
Some things went wrong
Things went beyond control

Unexpected, unexplainable
Phenomena came rushing
Crushing the very foundation
Efforts were not enough
Everything turns out dry
No matter how hard we try
Nothing can be done
To keep the flow going

It would be the best for us
To go separate ways
Now I believe, some things
Are not really meant to be
And we aren't meant to be
Go (up) north and
I'll go (down) south.

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#1 by Unofre Pili, Aug 26, 2008
Nice bro, I notice your poems point out to the same woman..reminiscent of Shakespeare's hundreds sonnets.
#2 by eddiego65, Aug 26, 2008
Great poem, bro. Seems to be a very personal one!
#3 by Claris, Aug 26, 2008
lovely poem that really comes from the heart
#4 by valli, Aug 26, 2008
Nice one.
#5 by Loreta Dorington, Aug 26, 2008
As one popular song goes "Some good things never last."
#6 by william rodriguez II, Aug 26, 2008
Very sentimental poem. I like it.
#7 by Moses Ingram, Aug 26, 2008
Thanks for this, your poetry is very good. This poem in particular seems to have special meaning for you.
#8 by Darlene McFarlane, Aug 26, 2008
Thanks for sharing with us nobert. Very nicely written.
#9 by Lauren Axelrod, Aug 26, 2008
Another wonderful piece Norbert
#10 by mae, Aug 26, 2008
nice. thanks for sharing.
#11 by acecampillo, Aug 26, 2008
I have never doubted you talent. :)
Nice poem, I hope I could also write poems that are as good as yours. God Bless You!
#12 by Rionel "2tet" Belen Caldo, Aug 27, 2008
I loved it! It's a feeling I'm into...

Best regards and keep reading,
2tet
http://www.triond.com/users/2tet
#13 by Karen N, Aug 27, 2008
Beautiful poem, Thanks for sharing.
#14 by Ruby Hawk, Aug 27, 2008
Very expressive. You tell it well.
#15 by tracy sardelli, Aug 28, 2008
Beautiful poem Nobert, Loved it, thank you.
#16 by Alexa Gates, Aug 28, 2008
great poem!
#17 by Cynthia, Aug 29, 2008
What an emotional piece of poetry. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. *S* Cynthia
#18 by nobert soloria bermosa, Sep 19, 2008
thank you very much for reading and commenting, i appreciate it very much more than words can say.
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