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I Have Not Passed This Way Before

A son far from home.

This verse was inspired by Navy Mom

Where have I come, expectations are unknown
No friendly face for comfort, a heavy heart is shown
The hill is steep my load is heavy
I cannot see the top, my tears hold back by levy
I have not passed this way before

The dark has come, unheard sounds I hear
My courage stands beyond to jeer
What morning brings I face alone
My strength is tested, I can but heave and grown
I have not passed this way before

But worry fades and my fear abates
My rescue prayer is where a Mother waits
I have passed this way before  

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#1 by Lindalulu, Oct 27, 2008
Awwwww...Grant you brought tears to my eyes. Thank You so much !
#2 by  Glynis Smy, Oct 29, 2008
Brilliant!! I enjoyed the sentiments of this work.
#3 by  DVL, Nov 16, 2008
There's a great sound to this, nice work :D
#4 by  Liane Schmidt, Nov 26, 2008
This is soft and beautiful and the picture helps to perfectly set the mood.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
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