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I Love You

by JNV, Jun 11, 2007

A poem that is simple, yet sweet.

In capitals
Not just in lower case
LOVE YOU taking time
Or when you're in a haste
I LOVE YOU in summer dresses
LOVE YOU in winter clothes
Love you when the sun is shining
When it rains, storms, or snows
I LOVE YOU when poetry can't find words to rhyme
LOVE YOU when you're too stressed out to stay within the lines
I love you with my eyesight, though they say love is blind
Love you when you tell me it will all be fine
LOVE YOU when you leave me all lonely and blue
Love you when you're angry and arguing back too
LOVE YOU in the morning
Love you when the day is through
This lil' poem simply states
that I LOVE YOU

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Comments (9)
#1 by Lucy Lockett, Jun 12, 2007
You wouldn't be in love would you? All I can say is lucky, lucky you! That would be nice one day. Simple but rather complex, well written.
#2 by Dustin Harrison, Jul 8, 2007
Man that was a good poem on love. Here's some good love advice: Please check out my article "10 Godly Ways to Determine True Love" it's on relijournal.com. It should be on the first page. Thanks. You'll enjoy it, and do me a favor and leave me a comment.
#3 by JNV, Jul 9, 2007
Sure, thanx for the heads-up.
#4 by lizzie2uk, Jul 15, 2007
Lots of emotion there...you need to0 feel it to be able to write like this!
#5 by Miss Webster, Jul 15, 2007
It's one of those things that you just have to feel yourself to know. Sure you can try to describe it but words can never really capture the entirety of love.
#6 by francie, Jul 29, 2007
Very touching, powerful words...sounds like you are in love!
Lovely poem..
#7 by R.B. Parsley, Aug 23, 2007
Hey JNV, one hell of a poem. I really liked this. Now we have two Poems titled I Love You. Keep up the great work!
#8 by Liane Schmidt, Oct 14, 2007
And, I LOVE this poem. I needed something like this today, when my heart is breaking.

God bless you.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
#9 by Lucy Lockett, Oct 20, 2007
Stopping by for another read, it is stilll great!
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