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I Remember

A past love that can't be forgotten.

When you kiss me that night
under the lonely moonlight
I remember my teary eyes
while our hearts are saying goodbye

I remember the lonesome river
where we share our romantic years
I can't forget its cold water
as cold as the end of our affair

I remember the comely flower
that you give as a first gift
The smell that touch my loving heart
The thorns that bleed my aching heart

I remember the sweet promises
that we made under the lonely moonlight
making me wait in the lonesome river
to receive in the end a pain of heart

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Comments (6)
#1 by Unofre Pili, Aug 2, 2008
Very inspired and romantic.
#2 by T.S. Wilkins, Aug 2, 2008
Indeed, very romantic and warm-hearted.
#3 by Athanase Vantchev de Thracy, Aug 3, 2008
You have a sweet soul, dear poet!
#4 by Fevirly, Aug 3, 2008
very nice!!! i love poetry too...
#5 by Rachel Faye, Aug 4, 2008
What a lovely poem.
#6 by Mannyrich, Aug 8, 2008
Thanks guys for all your feedbacks.
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