I agree with Angrified, the end made the good point. Nice poem. Short but still sensible.
#4 by Mark Gordon Brown, Aug 24, 2008
LMAO!!!!!
#5 by B Nelson, Aug 24, 2008
very clever work.
#6 by David, Aug 27, 2008
Why LMAO? Its a very sad poem
#7 by Me, Aug 27, 2008
Okay- I laughed out loud. I'm trying to figure out how this poem is sad. You've got to be EMO to think this poem is sad.
Okay, I could be warped, but I still can't see the sad part. I'm trying...
#8 by chikoos, Aug 28, 2008
I love the ending too. I might be wrong but I think it is full of sarcasm.
#9 by Alexa Gates, Aug 28, 2008
short and sweet and to the point!
#10 by Sandwhich, Aug 28, 2008
Its not sad or sweet, its comedy
#11 by TERESA JACKSON, Aug 29, 2008
I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU ARE COMING FROM. I LIKED YOUR POEM
#12 by Gale Barker, Aug 30, 2008
Beautiful in its simplicity and a very clever, neat ending.
#13 by tonisan60, Aug 31, 2008
It is nice this sarcastic poem, very modern style, my applauses
#14 by Natalie-Jane, Aug 31, 2008
I think it is defo a sarcastic poem, point well made.
#15 by Jerry Packer, Aug 31, 2008
If this was poetry..god help Robert Frost
#16 by Shafi Choudhury, Sep 2, 2008
very short but i still thinks its nice! But i more thought that it would be a fair long one!
