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It's OK to be Alone

Embracing one's self and understanding that we don't need to be surrounded by people to feel whole.

Alone. I feel Alone. Is it bad, by no means. Alone is how I love to be. But what is alone? I'm surrounded by people everyday, but what's inside remains hidden; away from predators who will take me for their prey. Alone I sit today, the same as yesterday, but I don't ache. Not the way I did when I let them in. They took a peek at my vulnerabilities; and jumped at them like a pack of wolves devouring their prey. Alone I sit and reminisce. No signs of worries or distress. I'm reminded of courage. I'm reminded of me. I'm reminded that it's okay to just be.

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Comments (7)
#1 by IcyCucky, Jan 20, 2008
Very nicely put..
#2 by Lucy Lockett, Jan 29, 2008
What a pleasant thought. Reminds me of a book I read called 'I'm okay, Your okay'. It was a head spinner!
#3 by ranfuchs, Jan 30, 2008
"We have to go out and make things happen for ourselves" you said and yet, you are so afraid of the predators who will take you for their prey. Shouldn't you make things happen for you despite the pain?
#4 by miriam ramirez, Jan 30, 2008
Yes, I do go out and make things happen for myself. What I meant by the predators is people who I\\\'ve entrusted in my life, in my home, with my heart and feelings; and in the end they took my kindess for weakness and tried to hurt me. Those are the predators I stay weary of. The line in the poem says \\\"I\\\'m surrounded by people everyday, but what\\\'s inside me remains hidden, away from predators who will take me for their prey. I\\\'m just cautious with my feelings, but I generally take risks in my life, emotions are something else. Thank you for your comment. Thank you for reading my poems.

miriam
#5 by miriam ramirez, Jan 30, 2008
I meant to say wary, not weary; although encounters with predators can make me weary. Thanks again
#6 by Lucia B, Jun 15, 2008
hm... it sounds like poetry to me... ^_^
#7 by mdegenhardt, Sep 22, 2008
It's not okay to just be, it's great. We make things happen for ourselves, by ourselves. Therefore, we need alone time and as you said, we are not always physically alone, but we must find the place wher we can be alone to think straight, to contemplate the day and our actions. Another lovely read. Michael
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