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L'amour

Enter my stage.

Enter my world
Enter my stage
Walk in
My two step
Parade

My confetti
My smile twists and
Breaks you

My mask
Can't
Fade
It's blue

That stallion whinnies
And, they stop to look


Her pigtails spin
She's on his shoulders
Again

The world's new
A different
View

Spinning above,
Spinning
It's love.

He takes her higher
He lifts her heart
Her small hands
Clap with glee

And, once again,

Without missing a beat
She's merrily bouncing
On his knee.

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Comments (11)
#1 by ANDY-N, Jul 22, 2008
Very pleasant!
#2 by The Quail, Jul 22, 2008
Very nice and very well done.
#3 by Dee Huff, Jul 23, 2008
How lovely.
#4 by Ira Hayes, Jul 23, 2008
Nice use of simple language to convey strong emotional content. Well Done.
#5 by nobert soloria bermosa, Jul 23, 2008
beautiful and lovely,thanks Liane
#6 by Richie Montalbo, Jul 23, 2008
This is very lovely. And the video is great too.
#7 by Justin L. Moreaux, Aug 1, 2008
Splendid use of language. :D I loved it!
#8 by lynn high, Aug 7, 2008
You are a great writer. I always enjoy reading what you come up with.
#9 by roberto sardelli, Aug 8, 2008
I am speechless, this one well writen and well worded. Bravo Liane.

Take care
Roberto
#10 by Lauren Axelrod, Sep 12, 2008
It's amazing when the music is playing along with it. Well done
#11 by  Timothy Russell, Nov 28, 2008
Very nice w/ little sugar and spice, it does more w/ less to find meaning in emotional flow. I personally have trouble reducing verbiage to be neat and trim, less calories more filling. I think I fear I will not get my meaning across if I don't fill in the spaces but I am going on a diet and write w/ more alacrity than explanatory. Oh, oh, I went and did it again. Quickly, say good bye, Adios.
PS I must know, is that you on the guitar??!?(pardon my igonorance)
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