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Mystic Eye

I dedicated this for my love.

When I saw you sit beside the tree
And you were thinking so freely
I suddenly stopped my walk
Then I began to stalk
You felt that there was someone watching you

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And you felt that someone was stalking at you
Oh baby, don't be so cruel
You were the one who made me like a fool
It's your mystic eyes that made this feeling
It's your mystic eyes that made me feel like flying
And when you looked at me with a smile
Your mystic eye put my life with the style.

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Comments (4)
#1 by The Quail, Aug 28, 2008
well done very moving.
#2 by nobert soloria bermosa, Aug 28, 2008
lovely and sweet,one of the many mysteries of love
#3 by Tina Brazee, Sep 17, 2008
Fantastic! Very sweet poem for the one you love. It warmed my heart.
#4 by Eden Emersen, Oct 15, 2008
The photo does feature someone with lovely eyes. . . you capture the mystique well.
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