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Not All Red Roses Are Lovely

Not all beauty is lovely.

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One fine afternoon, I saw a fair rose blossom,
And intended to pick it in at the crack of dawn;
Morning came, so I went excited to my lawn,
And at far, I saw it so fair in pompous bloom.
So I raced my steps for an anxious picking;
Its beauty I wholly and voraciously claimed,
And gave it the world's sweetest caressing;
Until I saw an ugly worm inside it, creeping.
In sullen dismay, I hurled it into a deep pit,
So in its gloomy world none will ever see it,
As if this fair rose never walked the earth,
And in deafening oblivion, it will slowly wilt.
A dirty scavenger saw the red rose though,
It was still aromatic and delighted the fellow
But the creeping ugly worm, he at once saw;
The red rose, quickly and bluntly, he threw.

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#1 by  CHAN LEE PENG, Jan 8, 2009
The pic is sooo nice, bro!
#2 by  CutestPrincess, Jan 8, 2009
what a lovely roses! i love the picture!
#3 by The Quail, Jan 8, 2009
awesome pic
#4 by  lindalulu, Jan 8, 2009
Very nice.
#5 by  Christine Ramsay, Jan 8, 2009
I really enjoyed that. It is such a shame it was not what it seemed.

Christine
#6 by nobert soloria bermosa, Jan 8, 2009
so true,lumalabas na ang pagka-poet m bro a,keep on
#7 by  MJPatrick, Jan 8, 2009
I didn't want to end, I think its fantastic.
#8 by  Liane Schmidt, Jan 8, 2009
Interesting, unique work - it's memorable.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
#9 by neelam pandey, Jan 8, 2009
The idea of the poem is unique in itself...nice expression...and the title of the poem can be applied to our general life as well.
#10 by Unofre Pili, Jan 8, 2009
Thanks everyone. Yes, Neelam, that red rose is a human being.
#11 by  papaleng, Jan 9, 2009
wow! something a really admire a rose and a beautiful poem. I like it much Bro..
#12 by  Jasin, Jan 9, 2009
Wow! very well done, lovethe words you used.
#13 by  Eunice Tan, Jan 9, 2009
The red color of your rose is lovely!
#14 by MMV Abad, Jan 9, 2009
Beauty can be deceiving. Love your photo, my friend and of course, your poem. Madalang ata to :)
#15 by LindenMarie, Jan 9, 2009
I prefer to cure the illness before throwing the beautiful rose away
#16 by Cheryl Sills, Jan 9, 2009
Sad poem. Good writing. Interesting observation. Pretty photo.
#17 by  Chris Stonecipher, Jan 9, 2009
Great poem. It took me a second to figure out you were talking about human life. That is what made the poem great. Your work is always enjoyable.
#18 by  Glynis Smy, Jan 9, 2009
Ah the prick of the thorn from a beautiful rose, a lesson in life is hard to learn. Nice work.
#19 by Juancav, Jan 9, 2009
Roses anyways are pricking.
#20 by  Majic, Jan 11, 2009
Lovely poetry! I thought there was a bit of politics in it though. I hope not! Keep it up!
#21 by Unofre Pili, Jan 11, 2009
Thanks everyone. Yes, Majic, that can be an alternative interpretation of this piece, but I really intended it to women (red rose) who have been careless, and were easily duped by so called faithful lovers (worms in this poem).
#22 by  Patrick Bernauw, Jan 12, 2009
Very nice!... The poem is talking in symbols... or like fairy tales do. It's very allegorical! Love it!
#23 by Mystical Whitewolf, Jan 12, 2009
Beautiful Rose...........nice poem.....
#24 by  eddiego65, Jan 13, 2009
Beautiful pic. Really nice poem! I like it!
#25 by  Melody Arcamo Lagrimas, Jan 16, 2009
Great shot, and what a nice poem.
#26 by  Toni Nakama, Jan 30, 2009
Nice poem and beautiful photo too!
#27 by  Kate Smedley, Mar 7, 2009
I really like this poem, gorgeous photo
#28 by rutherfranc, May 12, 2009
two thumbs up!
#29 by  Allison Jae, Jun 6, 2009
Great poem, and I love the photo too.
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