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Starting Over Yet Again

A path of change.

On a road that’s straight and narrow
lies a bend that hard not to follow
it’s filled with a bit of challenge
but you take it with no fear of malice

You were told you would fail
but you tried to prevail
Pushed and shoved many times
never stopped you from the climb

When you got there it is was your quest
you knew it was the result of a test
what was better than this feeling
a true test of healing

It was all at a halt
but it was not your fault
for the times had been changed
your life rearranged

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#1 by IcyCucky, Aug 28, 2008
I like this: "You were told you would fail
but you tried to prevail"
#2 by Karen N, Aug 28, 2008
Good job Lauren, Very nice.
#3 by Crissleigh, Aug 28, 2008
Very beautiful Lauren .
#4 by Lauren Axelrod, Aug 28, 2008
Thanks everyone. It was a much needed change from the usual top 10 lists.
#5 by nobert soloria bermosa, Aug 28, 2008
nice poem,thanks
#6 by iakul, Aug 29, 2008
Nice. Does that mean there be more poems from you in the future?
#7 by Lauren Axelrod, Aug 29, 2008
I have written five more but I don't want to compete with myself so I will be putting them on slowly but surely. Thanks for the comments.
#8 by CHAN LEE PENG, Aug 29, 2008
Good poem! Thanks, chef Lauren!
#9 by mdegenhardt, Aug 29, 2008
That's rght, never give up despite the odds and yo will always succeed.
#10 by Lauren Axelrod, Aug 29, 2008
Thanks so much Chan and mdegenhardt for the great comments.
#11 by Kiki Stamatiou, Sep 26, 2008
I like the lines, "you were told you would fail" "but you tried to prevail" I like the overall meaning within the poem about not giving up.

Take Care,

Kiki Stamatiou (Joanna Maharis)
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