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The Sunset

This is my very first poem I wrote as a permanent writer. It tells us about the beauty of the sun and the memories of school we might treasure.

It's the end of a lovely day
In the month of May.
Were in year 11.
There's only less than a year
When were in year 11.
Days like this will move in an instant.
Soon it will be in a far distance.
It's the end of a lovely day
The sky turning from blue to pink to orange and red.
The sun blaze spreading across the sky.
Telling me not to lie.
To tell everyone about the evenings sun.
So know one will be scared to run.
Every day, every year, the sun will remind me the high school days.
Because every student is represented in the sun's rays.
Student's pass away some time, in life time.
That you won't see them anymore.
There souls are in the sky.
That when you remember them, you'll cry.

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Comments (13)
#1 by Kim Buck, Oct 22, 2008
Great reflection of things to be soon missed.
#2 by Eric Mendoza, Oct 22, 2008
Very beautiful. I miss the school days sometimes, when I sit and think about how much fun it used to be.
#3 by bobby, Nov 9, 2008
You made me think about my friends as well
#4 by goodselfme, Nov 9, 2008
Well done.
#5 by  Kimberly Lee, Nov 11, 2008
Well done.
#6 by  Melody Arcamo Lagrimas, Nov 11, 2008
This is very well-written, nice work!
#7 by  MMV Abad, Nov 12, 2008
good stuff. lovely poem.
#8 by  Assemba, Nov 13, 2008
WOW! i loved it
#9 by  eddiego65, Nov 15, 2008
Lovely, very lovely!
#10 by  Reilley, Jan 6, 2009
This was pretty cool, I liked it.
#11 by  Brian Rasco Craig, Jan 6, 2009
This is very well-written, you have done a good job with this.
#12 by  Tennessee Thompson, Jan 7, 2009
Very interesting. Good job.
#13 by  nightcharmer, Mar 22, 2009
That was quite an impressive work for your first piece of poem as a permanent writer. Keep writing!
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