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The Sweet Song of Spring

Love's soft touch can be felt anytime of the year.


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I am quiet now, quiet
Still in the soft hum
That fills the evening air

I close my eyes
And the colors blend
I see yellow and purple hues
They appear a bit hazy
As I sit and wonder,
Sweet angel, who are you?

Yet for a reason I cannot explain
I miss the comfort, of your voice
Miss the ray of hope
The mere thought of you brings

It's like rivers of cascading divinity
It's like endless waves
Of rolling diamonds,
Reflecting you infinitely

And, sometimes
It's like the youthful song of a lonesome lark
The sweet song of spring

I am quiet now, quiet
And my thoughts,
Still drift to you

I'm a thinker
And a dreamer

And suddenly
You've captured my heart
Can't you see?

If only, you truly knew

I'm head over heels
Passionately,

In love with you

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Comments (28)
#1 by gabbic1219, Oct 24, 2008
so pleasent and sweet captivation in ur writing's
nice work!
#2 by mdegenhardt, Oct 24, 2008
This is trudly one beautiful read. It speaks of love in the greatest degree with a soft tone and such a smooth flow of thoughts, words and imagery. Michael
#3 by Lindalulu, Oct 24, 2008
ahhh...how relaxing it was to read this one.
#4 by Heart Stone, Oct 24, 2008
Very soothing---so sweet,
#5 by CHAN LEE PENG, Oct 24, 2008
Ya, I can see you,
Can you see me, pretty girl,
I'm just behind you..two steps backward,
I'm sleeping on the flower bud,
It's so tender and sweet,
Wanna visit my small bedroom,
I show you one day, pretty girl,
You gotta to love me one day!

Oh, Ms. Bee is coming,
I gotta to go with her,
As there'll be a ballroom,
Playing tunes from the morning glory,
Playing bands from Mr. Owl,
Parades from Mr.Ant, Mrs Booboo, etc. etc. etc.
And I'll flap my wings in front of the Mother God then.
Hoo..you sweet girl is coming,
HURRAY!!!

#6 by LP Jardine, Oct 24, 2008
very soft, good work.
#7 by Speed Limit, Oct 24, 2008
I forgot to say - a very good poem, Liane. I liked it.
#8 by Will Gray, Oct 24, 2008
Excellent and so romantic!
#9 by goodselfme, Oct 24, 2008
This is done so delicately with much depth.
#10 by NA Staffieri, Oct 24, 2008
Great poem, Liane. Great talent. Thanks for sharing.
#11 by Lauren Axelrod, Oct 24, 2008
The words are just dancing. I love this one Liane
#12 by nobert soloria bermosa, Oct 24, 2008
makes me feel i'm in love again
#13 by poetic enigma, Oct 24, 2008
this is a beautiful poem,
very lovely; full of depth
and flows wonderfully
#14 by Tom Woodside, Oct 24, 2008
this is a great poem. it is solemn, your words depict quietness. reads very well. by the way there have been no bad comments left to me. thanks for the concern.
#15 by Ruby Hawk, Oct 24, 2008
Ohhhh, How sweet. Don't ever lose your special touch.
#16 by Enzo Silvestri, Oct 24, 2008
nice...
#17 by Rookie Expert, Oct 25, 2008
Yet again im amazed with the simplicity and depth of your words!
#18 by St Adro, Oct 25, 2008
Nice work
#19 by louie jerome, Oct 25, 2008
Lots of of depth here!
#20 by Melody Arcamo Lagrimas, Oct 26, 2008
Very nicely written-filled with pleasant emotions. God bless.
#21 by TBone762, Oct 28, 2008
Hey Girl... Me again.
Completely agree with poetic enigma; couldn't have stated it more concisely! Except to include my own quote "I wept".
T
#22 by TBone762, Oct 28, 2008
Especially love the rolling diamonds metaphor... You ARE the shiznit!!! Sorry; had to steal that one from Snoop. ;-)~
#23 by tesskam, Oct 30, 2008
so beautiful
#24 by  The Gray Edge, Nov 3, 2008
The romantic energy from line to line is wonderful.
#25 by  Michele Cameron Drew, Nov 6, 2008
Amazing imagery with a gentle flow! My favorite part:

It's like rivers of cascading divinity
It's like endless waves
Of rolling diamonds,
Reflecting you infinitely

-Michele


#26 by  Tony Downing, Nov 9, 2008
A poem to grace any romantic greeting card; wish I could create work with such sentiments. ~T
#27 by A.M. McDonald, Nov 18, 2008
Another beautiful piece!!!

A.M. McDonald
#28 by  trishia, Jan 25, 2009
Wow-"rivers of cascading divinity" You are a talented and gifted writer,Liane. I've been under the weather recently-reading your writes helps me to rejuvernate! Thanks!
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