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Thoughts Rush in

A poem...

Thoughts rush in
And swirl around
A flurry of activity
That never make a sound
Dreams and wishes
Invade the space where
Daily duties abound
They join together and
Stand forever
Creating hope that is
Most profound…

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#1 by  Mys Lyke Meeh, Nov 23, 2008
Simple, quick yet meaningful!
#2 by  BC Doan, Nov 23, 2008
My favorite lines: "Dreams and wishes
Invade the space where
Daily duties abound"
#3 by Nick Kenney, Nov 23, 2008
Thank you Mys and B.C. just simple thoughts yet such a sweet release to be putting them down in print again...
#4 by Naomi Joyce Lewis, Nov 23, 2008
I like the way you expressed this one and it is often that way in life. Ma
#5 by  PR Mace, Nov 23, 2008
Great way with a poem. Very meaningful. You know you got me into trying more poems. You should read my last two. So happy you are back. I will sent you a message later, Pam
#6 by  Darlene McFarlane, Nov 24, 2008

Short, sweet, and to the point. Nice message, Nick.
#7 by  R.B. Parsley, Dec 18, 2008
Nick,
Loved it much! It shows your back in form again. Loved the message!!! Fantastic!!!!!! Hope to be reading one of your new animal stories soon!!! Take care buddy & message me soon!!! Want to know what you been doing all this time!!! Mary asks if I've heard from you quite often.

Tell Jan Hi for us and give her our love.


Again, Excellence at its best!!!!!!!!!! Fantastic poem!!!!!!!!


Randy
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