Unique Relationship: The Sad Ending

it's a sad ending, sentimental piece

Sad ,but shouldn´t be so ,a must be tolerant, in religious matter.

It is very sad.

So very sad Norbert. Another wonderful piece by you though.

Sad but beautiful

It is a thought provoking poem and one that will never be solved so long as we are caught up in religious dogma. Wouldn't it be wonderful if we all choose love as our religion? What a peaceful world we would have.

This is sad and should make us realize that we are all one.

The first poem I came across embedding such a theme. Nice

Very sad reality of life.

This is a hard bridge to gap if our love is not for the same God. I believe that my God is Love and bridges all gaps.

Nobert your poem is beautiful and exquisitely sad. I hope it is only art, as I would not want to suffer so.

Take care and God bless.

Very sad, but it doesn't have to be so!

sad...love should have no walls... no boundaries... regardless of religion.

So sad... Beautifully written...

Very sad indeed...but interesting...

A very sad part of life that a love of God can keep lovers apart. A very touching poem. You are a man of many talents.

A very sad poem. I really appreciate this one of a kind poem.

Lovely poem, a very sad reality.

I like your poem. It is sad but it has something to say to the one you love... i felt that there is more you want to ask why... You are so inlove yet hurt at the same time

Such a sad but beautiful poem.

this brings to mind the scripture about following God not man. cultural/religious restrictions are man-made and have little to do with the reality of God. too often people pledge their loyalty to religion rather than only to God. the willingness to throw off (often erroneous)cultural conditioning takes a lot of courage and strength most people have yet to develop, and, rarely, two in sync at the same moment to achieve that goal of pledging love above all the consequences. good write and food for thought! ~ d

thank you very much for reading and commenting, i appreciate it very much more than words can say.