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Unique Relationship

Some relationships are better when kept secret sometimes.

It's hard,
it's happy,
It's sad
that's the picture
of our love
for every moment
that we steal
we're so happy
our world is filled
with happiness
joy overflowing
hoping always
it doesn't
have to end
but we need to
accept reality
our relationship
must keep secret
because our situation
is unique
I'm free
you're free
but somehow
we have to keep
it this way
ahhh….love
it's really
fascinating
it's truly
mysterious.

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Comments (14)
#1 by Unofre Pili, Jun 1, 2008
Nice piece buddy. Reminds me of the poetry of E.E. Cummings.
#2 by valli, Jun 1, 2008
Nice poetry.
#3 by Ruby Hawk, Jun 1, 2008
LOve makes the world go round.
#4 by tracy sardelli, Jun 1, 2008
very true, love is indeed a mystery.
#5 by salvatore, Jun 1, 2008
great poem buddy, thanks for sharing.
#6 by deepbluesea, Jun 1, 2008
Wonderfully written!
#7 by Anna Ski, Jun 1, 2008
The more mysterious the more intriguing just like your poem. I like.
#8 by Lucy Lockett, Jun 1, 2008
Sounds amorous and seductive!
#9 by Shames, Jun 2, 2008
Lovely poem!
#10 by Darlene McFarlane, Jun 2, 2008

Mysterious and intriguing! Makes me hope for a second part.
#11 by quiet voice, Jun 2, 2008
..Hi there, well written and
causes one to ponder....
good job.
#12 by Judy Sheldon, Jun 5, 2008
Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
#13 by PR Mace, Jun 11, 2008
Sometimes two people in love just to live in their own bubble for a while. That bubble is a good place to be. Nice job. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
#14 by dee gold, Jul 28, 2008
mysterious that's how love is.Keep it up friend!
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