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The Fall of Gielinor Part 1

I always thought Gielinor would die from a massive war, one many times more deadly than the God Wars of the Third Age. There would be a great battle, greater than any, where all the Gods would walk among us and fight beside their fractions. There would be a plague, slaughtering the forces from the inside. But the true judgment day was different.

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You know, life is a funny thing. One day, you're content with being rich and popular. Next day, you're running for your life from a hoard of mindless beasts. Many may have told a tale like this before but it was never fully true. Now, I will tell the tale, from beginning to end, truly. Many may tell their parts of this but those who I disallow, I shall hunt down and slaughter them and leave their bodies for the beasts.

Therefore, now my tale begins...

It was a fine summer day. Beggars were crying for money, the rich strutting about, laughing at the poor and the middle class, smiling contentedly. A scream pierced the air, catching the attention of all. A man covered in blood was assaulting a young woman. He seemed to be trying to tear her throat out. The woman tried to push him off but the bloodstained man tore into her arm. She screamed in agony, blood seeping through the wound that had a large chunk of flesh missing. A warrior wearing a weird Brassard that barely covered any flesh, a powerful pair of legs made of the same material and no helmet on.

He was wearing a long cape, made of extremely powerful cloth, strong enough to stop a blade's bite. On his belt, two dangerous looking daggers hung. In his hands, a drawn blade and whip were out. The whip, fused with darkness, had the ability of burning all it touched apart from the wielder. The blade, made out of Dragonite, was powerful enough to cut through stone and butter yet extremely light. His hands were gauntleted in the same material as his armor. His boots were simple climbing boots for rough terrain.

The warrior grabbed the attacker off the woman and threw him into the wall.

“You Bastard! Why attack her?” He called to the man. The man growled and leapt at him, seemingly unaffected after being thrown at high speed into a wall. The warrior stabbed the man in the stomach then quickly ripped his sword upwards and cut open the man then yanked it out. He kicked it to the ground.

The monster got up and bit into the throat of a nearby watcher, tearing out the jugular and causing a lot of blood to pour out the wound. Everyone screamed and the warrior stared in shock. Even a dragon would be dead from such a strike. This was a new beast and now He was interested. The beast kept leaping and tearing into people's throats. Then it went back and tore into their flesh, eating it. The warrior quickly ran up to the beast and stabbed it through the head. It fell down, dead this time.

Jack sighed. So much death for a simple assault yet so powerful... Suddenly, those who had been killed by the beast rose from the ground and started biting into other people. Everyone started screaming. Jack used the mental link people could share with their friends to communicate to 4 of his friends. “Nameless pain, meet me in Edgeville! No buts, this is fucking bad! You too Jen, Razor and Roy!” Jack raised his hand into the air and quickly yelled aloud, “PADDEWA TELEPORT!”

I always thought Gielinor would die from a massive war, one many times more deadly than the God Wars of the Third Age. There would be a great battle, greater than any, where all the Gods would walk among us and fight beside their fractions. There would be a plague, slaughtering the forces from the inside. But the true judgment day was different.

There was a plague but it slipped by all the forces, tearing everyone from the inside out, turning them into monsters that fed on those they once were. Before the Legends and Heroes had time to assemble, before the Big Guys had time to turn the key and stop it, It was over. All were dead, or worse. Those who survived wondered if they were either damned or lucky. Those who died were safe. Those who turned, cursed. I wonder if it was worth the effort.

As Jack landed nimbly out the teleport, he saw Nameless pain jump out of another teleport nearby.

“Ok Jack, what's happening?” Nameless asked.

“See for yourself…” Jack said, shooting a barrage of ice into a rock, turning it into a scrying glass.

“Lumbridge Scry...” Jack muttered.

Nameless pain looked into the glass and went so white, you thought he'd died. People were tearing into each other, ripping out their throats, biting into legs, arms, chests, faces. Beasts that appeared from the gods were torn to bits, not to rise again. Those whom had been torn into were rising, almost hours after bites on the arms or legs. Serious bites caused quicker spreading. Nameless pain puked, almost resenting looking in.

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Comments (16)
#1 by S. Buland Shah, Jul 18, 2007
WOW WHAT A COINCIDENCE. I AM MAKING 23 STORIES ABOUT A BOY WHO LIVES IN GIELINOR (BASED ON RUNESCAPE), AND HOW HE SAVES THE PLANET FROM VARIOUS THREATS. AWESOME. I LOVE YOUR STORY. MY STORY WILL BE PUBLISHED LATE.
#2 by Sim Kai Long, Jul 18, 2007
LOL! Glad you enjoyed my story !
#3 by S. Buland Shah, Jul 18, 2007
I just can't wait for part 2
#4 by Wali Abro, Jul 19, 2007
AMAZING COINCIDENCE! I PLAY RUNESCAPE TOO! And Buland, This Is Quite Shocking For You Too, I ALWAYS Heard You Talking About Your Story Of A Boy And Blah Blah Gielinor Something Something. Buland, Just Make Wally And Tiffany Together With Similar Types... And Hair Colours Too =P.. Nice Story Too. I'm Gonna Wright Some About RuneScape Now Too! =P
#5 by S. Buland Shah, Jul 19, 2007
I'm sorry Wali, what is done is done. I'm making a story about Gielinor too (and believe me I didn't copy it from you Sim Kai, ask Wali). I have changed it a bit thought. In my version of Gielinor the magic skill has gone up by one level. Wizardry is the highest level of magic (in my version) and each wizard has it's own element that it can control (they are also known as elementals). The main characters in my story are Todaishi (a fire elemental/wizard), Tiffany (a nature elemental/witch)and Wally (an ice elemental/wizard). I have made some new runes too and they are ice, electric, and darkness runes. I have also made a new armour which has the capabilities similar to a dragon armour, the Bushido Full. The Bushido Full is a complete samurai armour, and new weapons such as the Ninja-to a katana with the ability of any element. Also, for ninjutsu (a new skill) I've added the suit, Ninja Full, a suit that allows a person to move free like a bird to perform ninjutsu techniques, and the suit comes in four colours, green, black, white, and red. There will be 23 books on my version of Gielinor. The first one, will be released sooner this year.
#6 by S. Buland Shah, Jul 19, 2007
Master Sim Kai Long, uh sir, with your permission I can create a new story which will be completely different from my 23 stories. It'll be based on your Fall Of Gielinor: part 1. It'll be called The End Of Gielinor. It's just based on your story, its not related with my other 23 stories, and its just to show how Gielinor would end in my point of view. Master Sim Kai Long, I hope you give me permission on creating The End Of Gielinor.
#7 by S. Buland Shah, Jul 19, 2007
Just another short request, can you please release Fall Of Gielinor: Part 2 quickly, I'm anxious to no what happens next.
#8 by Sim Kai Long, Jul 20, 2007
S.Buland Shah, I really appreaciate your enthusiasm of reading the second part of the story. However, the story is not meant to end with just two parts. Maybe you can write the Second part ? And i will write the 3rd. You write the forth, and so on ? It will be a great experience to have such a enthusiastic partner in this story ! However, due to my school days which has just started, I am not able to complete the story as quickly as possible as homework comes first.( you know, i don't want to fail my subjects.xP ) and i would not be so active.
#9 by S. Buland Shah, Jul 21, 2007
Sim Kai, I would be happy to write the second part for you. =D
#10 by Sim Kai Long, Jul 21, 2007
S.Buland Shah, any idea how would you post it ? I want to earn from it too. Can I be the one to post it ?
#11 by Sim Kai Long, Jul 22, 2007
S.Buland Shah, i would also like you to know that my name is actually "Kai Long" and my surname is "Sim". I think our format of the names is different from yours. LOL, Just telling you to let you know. xP
#12 by S. Buland Shah, Jul 22, 2007
Kai, if you tell me your email address I can send you the complete story of Fall Of Gielinor Part 2 through a mail.
#13 by Sim Kai Long, Jul 22, 2007
S. Buland Shah, I would be glad to do that. But to keep our mail private is a must, so why don't you post your email here. I will send you a mail after that and you will then know mine. After all that, i can delete your message! xD
#14 by Speed Limit, Jul 24, 2007
Are we going to be able to read part 2 after all these negotiations?
#15 by S. Buland Shah, Jul 24, 2007
I will be making part 2 and Kai will be publishing it. Then Kai will be making part 3 and then I'll make part 4 and he'll publish it and so on.
#16 by Sim Kai Long, Jul 30, 2007
Nowadays, I'm quite busy with my schoolwork. If you guys want to read the second part. Please be patient. xD
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