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Tommie Girl two Falcon Wings

When Tommie Girl was a little girl, she would often dream of being a falcon. She wanted to be a falcon to fly away from the crime that was going on around her in the hood. So that gave her the idea to design falcon wings into a vest that she made.

Tommie Girl had a heart for the religious leader, Little Benny. She kept her distance because he was a Christian. Tommie girl worked for an evil man. Little Benny thought that she looked like a boy and never paid attention to her. But that part did not seem to bother Tommie Girl. She knew she could fix that problem whenever she wanted to.

Tommie Girl did not feel good about her own self because she came from the projects. She really didn't have much freedom working for an evil man. When Tommie Girl was a little girl, she would often dream of being a falcon. She wanted to be a falcon to fly away from the crime that was going on around her in the hood. Tommie Girl wanted to live on the country side of life. So that gave her the idea to design falcon wings into a vest that she made. Whenever Tommie Girl dressed up, she felt like a new person. She felt good about herself, but it never went to her head.

Little Benny seemed different from any of the guys in her neighborhood. They were all on drugs and into crime. That's why Tommie Girl liked Little Benny. Her father was the only decent man she knew. Then Little Benny caught her eye at the park. Whenever Little Benny saw Tommie Girl at the park, he did not know that he was looking at the same woman. He thought he was looking at someone else. Little Benny had often seen Tommie Girl at a street corner store. That's when she looked like a boy. When she looked like a beautiful woman, Benny paid more attention to her, but he never asked her out on a date. He had his eyes on someone else. Little Benny was not hasty in choosing a woman. He knew that he was trying to live his life as a Christian, and he wanted a Christian woman.

Tommie Girl kept her tomboy disguise to herself when she found out that Little Benny did not recognize her looking like a gorgeous model. She would not dare to tell him that she was from the projects. Little Benny could see in Tommie Girl's eyes that she admired him. He did not know that she was the tomboy that wore glasses. Tommie Girl did not wear her glasses when she was dressed up. Whenever Little Benny would talk to Tommie at the park, he studied her. He found out that she had a great love for children, and he became a little more interested in her. Tommie Girl wanted to tell Benny about the evil leader known as Cigar, but she was so afraid. Little Benny wanted to talk to Tommie Girl about helping him rescue children from the hands of Cigar, but he thought it was too dangerous for Tommie. Whenever Tommie and Benny departed, they departed unsatisfied. Whenever they went to the park, they were always looking for each other. Now, Tommie Girl felt like she had some falcon wings and a place to fly to whenever she wanted to get away from the projects.

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Comments (7)
#1 by Michelle~Parker, Apr 17, 2007
What a great creative story line. Where do you get such great ideas and how do you do this beautiful unique art of yours?
#2 by Gail Nobles, Apr 17, 2007
Some of my ideas come from real life and some ideas I make up. The more a person knows about life, the more a person can write, just like you do.

For my art, I use an animation program. There are figures within the program. I can make still pictures with them and add on with paint and recreate.
#3 by Lucy Lockett, May 12, 2007
Just keep on drawing from your experiences and sharing! It adds to my life, seeing things from a different perspective.Thank you.
#4 by Jessica Fike, May 13, 2007
wonderful drawing, great story!
#5 by Gail Nobles, May 14, 2007
Thanks Lucy and Jessica. I'm so glad you all like some of my stories. It really keeps me creating.
#6 by Lisa, May 28, 2007
Keep writing about Tommie Girl. Keep adding characters to Little Benny's world. Gail, you are great entertainment.
#7 by Gail Nobles, Jul 4, 2007
Thank you, Lisa!
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